Summary + Reader Response (draft 2)
In the article, “An Architect’s Guide to Building with Bamboo,” Vadot (n.d) states that bamboo is a reliable and sustainable material for future construction. He mentions that bamboos can mature fast with little maintenance and it is being harvested in various places around the world. Bamboo is available at a low cost in these areas, and it is affordable due to its light weight as it can be transported easily. He also notes that bamboo is often referred to as an alternative for steel due to its hardness. He then explained that the bottom and top part of the bamboo can be used for different purpose in construction. He concludes that it is impossible to classify all 1,200 species of bamboo under a standardized civil building code. However, standards have been made locally in Columbia. While Vadot mentions mainly about the advantages of bamboo and how it should be used as a material in construction, he did not mention much about the disadvantages and why is it not being used commonly.
From the article written by Vadot,
it states that bamboo is available at low cost. However, there are reasons why
it is not use widely in construction around the world and Vadot fails to
mention it. In the article “Bamboo as a Construction Material” (2016), Veronica
R mentions that “finding a reliable bamboo supplier that provides a quality product
may be a challenge. If the bamboo is imported, this usually equates to higher
costs”. To be able to use bamboo for construction, one must look for a suitable
bamboo. It is very challenging to look within 1200 species of bamboo and select
the right one. For example, in Singapore there isn’t any bamboo field. To
obtain construction graded bamboo Singapore must import from other countries
which will increase the cost. With this I can tell that vadot article is very
biased, he should have written the disadvantages for countries that does not
have its own bamboo field.
Secondly, Vadot also mention that steel can be replaced by
bamboo. With the explanation that he given “due to its hardness”. He should not
only mention about the strength of bamboo, but also talk about the weakness
compared to steel. In the article “Comparative Analysis of The Tensile Strength
of Bamboo And Reinforcement Steel Bars As Structural Member In Building Construction”
(2015), the authors state that “The tensile test result indicates that bamboo
unlike steel has a very poor tensile property and undergoes brittle failure
when loaded”. From this article It shows that bamboo is much more brittle than
steel. For a material to be used in constructing of a structure, the safety
consideration is the most important aspect. A material that undergoes brittle failure when
loaded will lose it popularity.
Lastly, from what we all know bamboo are not usually used in
constructing building, landmarks around us, we can hardly find any structure
built with it nowadays. From my own experience, I have only seen small houses
and hut that are built with bamboo. In the article “Bamboo as a Building
Material” (2014), it states that “bamboo is subjected to attack by fungi,
insects and for this reason bamboo structures are viewed as temporary with an
expected life of not more than 5 years” from this statement it shows that
bamboo is not durable compared to those commonly used materials. Vadot did not give
reasons why it is not commonly used. An important property of a construction
material is to be durable. Companies and citizens would not want to spend lots
of money to construct or stay in a structure that is not durable. Nowadays with
materials evolving, choices of material for construction increases, therefor
bamboo loses its popularity.
In conclusion, Vadot article focus mainly on the advantages
of bamboo, it shows a one-sided point of view. If Vadot had written both
advantages and disadvantages of bamboo, his article would seem less biased.
Reference
Vadot, C. (n.d.). An Architect’s Guide to
Building With Bamboo. Architizer.
https://architizer.com/blog/practice/details/how-to-bamboo/
Veronica, R. (2016). Bamboo as a Construction
Material. MODLAR.
https://www.modlar.com/news/145/bamboo-as-a-construction-material/
Ogunbiyi, Moses A., Olawale, Simon
O., Tudjegbe, Oke E., Akinola, S. R.(2015). Comparative Analysis Of The Tensile
Strength Of Bamboo And Reinforcement Steel Bars As Structural Member In
Building Construction.
Ar. Dhenesh Raj, Ar. Bindu
Agarwal. (2014). Bamboo as a Building Material. krishisanskriti.
https://www.krishisanskriti.org/vol_image/03Jul201502074415.pdf
Thanks, Cheng Quan, for this well-researched and interesting essay. You have a clear, concise, and appropriate summary. You also present a fairly well focused thesis — with two specific controlling ideas — even though you might be able to clarify those points further. I like the way you support the thesis in your body paragraphs with rich information. What is missing though are clear topic sentences -- heading each body paragraph -- that directly relate back to the thesis and its controlling ideas. There are other issues in terms of language use and citation conventions that we can review, and your reference list needs refined, but content-wise this is a good effort. Let’s talk today.
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